Our first compilation of the film.
Feedback on our first attempt:
The film needed more sound that would create more of an atmosphere throughout the entirety of the film.
However the film does jump around from location to location without a smooth transition, breaking continuity for the drama genre which is detrimental and needs to be fixed.
The final issue with our film was the lack of context behind what he does throughout the entire film. Therefore one piece of feedback was that we needed to add a voice clip with a scene at the end which reveals the context behind his actions, but also creates an enigma until the end of the film.
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